No offense, but your song needs help. I've been a songwriter for very many years and it was poor. Has too short of lines and not much of a capturing story plot. Along with generic type lyrics, and not much of a formatting, such as intro, verse, chorus, verse, hook, chorus, chorus, outro. If you put more of a story build with a formatting, it would be possible to be famous like Lady Gaga. I would recommend Madame Platypus not be your stage name. No offense.
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